Talk:Eds in the Dark Future/@comment-224939-20101225145137

First off, you need to work on your grammar. Second, it appears that there are multiple similarities between my story (Desolation Ed) and yours. Let's name a few:


 * World War 3 occurs
 * The Cul-de-Sac Kids stay in a vault
 * Eddy hates living in vault
 * Edd is a librarian
 * Ed works as a janitor (I assume this is what you mean by "bottomless toilet")
 * There is a character who wears a mask in order to hide a physical deformity
 * And there is a actually a location called Junktown!

Without a doubt my story has influenced you. Strangely enough, I am actually interested in read this story just to see what other similarities occur. Do me a favor and improve your grammar so that the story can be somewhat readable.