Talk:Eds for Life/@comment-33637326-20140304045347/@comment-33637326-20140309185059

I don't know where you got that I was saying that a kid having a sunburn has anything to do with a kid with autism. I was trying to help you. That excerpt was an example of proper grammar structure.

1. Character names/nicknames should always be capitalized.

2. When someone starts talking and someone else had talked in that paragraph, start a new paragraph.

I was trying to show you these things. If you give me permission I'll show you what your story should look like.