Talk:Kevinbound/@comment-4854317-20120425171302/@comment-2206925-20120425211134

I promise that Eddy will appear later in the story, and his absence in Pomegranate Pool was intentional, but you'll have to be patient on this one. In the mean time, I'm going to ask you to stop editing in parts of the story on your own. I have the rest of it planned to the finish, but I simply haven't written it all out just yet. I'd happily take in suggestions of course (probably best if you leave them on my talk page instead of on here), but please don't try and change the story yourself.

Anyway, your fanart is appreciated and very flattering, but if I am to be brutally honest, using stick figures to represent everyone seems a little bland. If nothing else, I'd suggest making them a bit shorter; it would make everyone look more like kids and it would allow the picture to be narrower. Having such tall characters in such wide images makes it hard to see details beyond the sillhouette, and since they're stick figures, a sillhouette is not much to go by at all. Regardless, I really do appreciate that you're willing to go through the time and effort to make fanart at all, so thank you!