User blog comment:PB&Jotterisnumber1/New Fan-Fiction./@comment-5072614-20120630063140

I don't like how you brought in Apple Products and Temple Run. May I suggest that you "parodize" them, such as a uPod, uCell, and a uPad. For Temple Run, you could say its called "Pyramid Escape" or something like that. What I'm trying to say is that you should leave real-world stuff out of your fan fiction.