Talk:Zach That has a Smart Brother/@comment-224939-20110404210607/@comment-2047157-20110405015335

Doc Mad Says: The spelling and grammar evidenced is one factor that kills the realism, seriously how could you get transfered from McDonalds?

There is no fanfiction relating to this so this characters full Stu potential has yet to be confirmed. Now for the "star of the show" nonsense, I'm afraid the subject of this wiki is fanfiction is Ed, Edd n Eddy. Not Zach, while OCs can play major roles in a story. They can't outshine the canon characters. They must either share the stardom with any of the canon characters.

This one in particular is trying to follow the "Fourth Ed" rule, which while possible is difficult. The only OC here who qualifies as the official unofficial fourth Ed is [ http://edfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Edna Edna] Why? While she has most of the three Eds positive traits combined; she also has her own weaknesses. That and the author Technomaru did an impressive effort fleshing out the character. Although at first glance many dub her a Sue, if you take the time to read the stories that she is featured in made by her creator. You may come to like her and believe that Edna is a perfect example of not only a fourth Ed, but an OC in general done right. How to fix all of this, take my proposition into consideration and read other authors stories. Observe how they flesh out their OCs and make it clear that they are not perfect. You will go far upon doing so. Although I'm pretty sure that this will be abandoned and eventually deleted. With the writer learning nothing. In fact this is a possible offender of the Vanity policy. That is what I propose.