Talk:Peach Creek War 2/@comment-99.18.205.37-20110804155431/@comment-2047157-20110804172314

Just because we're poitning out the flaws in your story; dosen't mean either of us should write it for you. It's your sole responsibility, but if you want to be taken more seriously. Why not go to a creative writing class? It will not only make you better at writing, but you would start getting positive reviews for a change. Just a suggestion.