Talk:Ed, Edd n Eddy Z: Platinum's Revenge/@comment-2047157-20101217233745

I see how this is, the four of you blindly praise each others stories without pointing out flaws, which only encourages you to make more with no improvement, and while I have to show respect to EEnE Z if I want to be Administrator. That dosen't mean I can't review.

First, the detail in this is insufficient, you need to add detail to Platinum. You can't just say he looks like Cooler but with different colors. You will then have to describe Cooler's appearence because some people (unlike myself) will not know who the Hell he is. Also describing the surroundings and enviroment helps too.

Second, it's pretty rushed. One minute the Eds, Corey and Drew are on their way home from school. The next Eddy and Sonic are at the end of a one hour spar. The next after that, "Pain" and "Katna" get their asses kicked. There is a lot of unknown events that occoured in that time, and now we won't find out about them.

Nothing a quick rewrite and a trip to this link hopefully can't fix. http://edfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Tips_For_Ed,_Edd,_N'_Eddy_Fanfiction

-Dr. Angryslacks of Critics United.