Talk:Peach Creek war/@comment-99.18.205.37-20110802021551/@comment-224939-20110802173636

It means write a battle scene that's longer than 6 freakin sentences!

The whole story talks about the events that lead up to the big battle, building up tension and suspense, yet when the battle finally takes place we only get a pathetic 6 sentences describing it. Elaborate more so that we can be satisfied.