Talk:Ed, Edd n Eddy Z: Interdimensional Crisis/@comment-2047157-20110615022307

Well, it took a while but now it's time for a review.

Since you already mentioned some of the problems such as the crossover happening too soon and such. I'll just skip them because you already know.

Spelling and grammar are tip-top, and the crossover with Collisions is intresting. (Maybe that's a reason why you wanted me to read it) Not to mention the subtle fourth wall breaks sprinkled about.

Combat is pretty solid, you manage to put enough detail to get the job done. Although I know you could do better and could paint a picture in the readers mind. The text-based fight with Oskuro can't replicate the action of it being animated, but you kept it amusing enough to keep me on my toes.

Then chapter five happened:

You already know this but dude, you jumped the shark. I mean seriously, out of all of the universes Corey and Sonic could go and you chose Bambi? WTF?! Don't me started on the fact that a fawn is more powerful than a human either.

All in all, you had a good story going until halfway through. I just hope you can find a way to redeem it (or continue it, that's good too).

-Dr. Angryslacks.