Talk:Desolation Ed/@comment-1781822-20110115200433/@comment-224939-20110117055452

I hate those kind of reviews. They only answer the author's simple question of "Did you like the chapter?" They don't answer important questions like "Which parts were the most enjoyable to you?", or "What made the chapter so great?", or "What can I do to make the story continue to be great?"

Speaking of which, since you caught that typo in Chapter 10 I assume you read the story, so would you kindly leave a review for it? :)